Your contents page is much better than your main cover, you have acted on advice/feedback/targets and produced a piece of work that is proficient in terms of images, layout and typography. In order to improve further for the main task: * Check your grammar (there is a full stop mid sentence on one of your stories) * Think up snappier story summaries that really grab the attention of your target audience.
Your contents page is much better than your main cover, you have acted on advice/feedback/targets and produced a piece of work that is proficient in terms of images, layout and typography. In order to improve further for the main task:
ReplyDelete* Check your grammar (there is a full stop mid sentence on one of your stories)
* Think up snappier story summaries that really grab the attention of your target audience.